Great poem. i do want to give you a tip though. the last line "do it again and ill mess you up" put in a different way, like "the next mistake you make, karma will be your fate" or something in that matter. Just a little help. But other than that, it was a fantastic poem, i really felt the way you did by reading, i could relate to it and understand what your were meaning. so i think it was fantastic. KEep on writing. GREAT JOB!
Silent angel*

This is a great poem...its heavy...i felt it... I like that