A 17 year old girl

by Amber   Jul 24, 2008


A 17 year old girl sitting
behind her door with it
slightly cracked, listening
to her parents argue.
Tears rolling down out of
her hazel eyes. They are
arguing because Mom wants
to go. Dad wants to put all
the blame on Mom. The
girl wants to say something
but she's scared. Then they
switch to the subject of her.
Oh god is all she can manage
to whisper while she silently
cries. All of a sudden they call
her name, she quickly sniffles
the tears away standing there in
front of them both. When mom
says "Go on, tell him."
"Tell him what?" she asks.
"Tell him who you would rather go with."
"Mom," she said, trying to hold her
tears back. The questioning goes
on for a few moments more but
to her it seems like hours. When
there was a pause she went back
to her room with tears streaming
out of her eyes.
A 17 year old girl sitting
behind my door silently
crying while writing, waiting
for it all to end.

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Some of you I bet probably noticed how in the end It said "my door"

Well hopefully you can pick up in that and realize who the poem was about.

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  • 16 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    Wow. i tottaly know how u feel in this. so sad and i hope all goes well. 5/5
    **harlea

  • 16 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    Ur amazing. keep writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by Megan

    Im so sorry for what your going through.
    if you ever need to talk i'll be here for you.
    just dont hurt your self its not worth it.
    sooner or later somthing good will happen.
    i found out my expericence.

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    Nice work, I think you really captured the moment here. Such a good piece for so many parents to read and understand. Nice work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tangible heartache

    Awww Amber I am sooo sorry. Thats so sad. But written perfectly, you didnt need to rhyme or anything, you just let the words out and they spoke it all.

    [[hugs you]]

    I'd hug you more, but Mark ^^^ Stole all the hugs. :(

    Hope you know I am here for you whenever you want to talk. Great poem, 5/5