Life is like an ocean.
So surprising and so full of emotion.
The roar of the waves is rough.
To escape their hold, would be tough.
Just like leaving behind the pain,
An ocean likes to play its games.
Just gazing into the sun drenched ocean so wide
Makes you forget the pain and time you can bide
Life is like an ocean and its full of bliss
A moment suspended in time that you cant miss
Sometimes the ocean is dire and you have to take a boat
If you stay calm though you can let your soul float
Falling into the oceans cold arms
Don't worry though it will cause you no harm
Trust the wind and the oceans breeze
Trust the warmth and you will never freeze
Life is like an ocean watch the waves crash at you feet
Full of passion and grace its a feeling that cant be beat
You walk farther into the water
And decide to let go of all your bothers
Let the waves wash it all away
Live for now and worry another day.
With an ocean, comes something new.
A feeling, a sensation, that you never knew.
It's like you're a new person.
Simply glowing under the sun.
The wind swiftly blows your hair,
Rising your deepest spirits into the air.
Never before have you felt this happy.
You wonder why you were ever unhappy.
Life is an ocean full of mystery and blunder
Deep like a poem and dark like a blunder
Almost like a dream reflections will grow
Smiles will shine on faces, and no pain will show
The stars will shine making the ocean so blue
feelings will flow making life's ocean so true
(Stanza 1, 4, and 5 are mine, stanzas 2,3, and 6 are james')
"Life is like an ocean.
So surprising and so full of emotion.
The roar of the waves is rough.
To escape their hold, would be tough.
Just like leaving behind the pain,
An ocean likes to play its games."
^I love how you say life is like an ocean. And this whole stanza really got me interested and wanted to read more....
"You walk farther into the water
And decide to let go of all your bothers
Let the waves wash it all away
Live for now and worry another day.
With an ocean, comes something new.
A feeling, a sensation, that you never knew."
^Such a inspiring stanza! Your words touched me and really had me smiling the whole time!
The rhyme is amazing and I really felt like I was right there, next to the ocean, watching the waves.....
In this whole poem, I could image everything you wrote and I really loved each bit of this. This collab is really beautiful, and really calms and soothes me when I read it. It gives off inspiration and a feeling of peace.
Great work!