Awe...hmm...honestly..the second stanza kinda had me um fixing ur words..haha..i think "out" shuld be "our"... it was really good. and im glad u let it out u know! forget him!!

<3 Aly

This is really good great job

Hate is a strong word. But if u feel like this for that person then you do. I liked it tho sorry you'll didnt work out tho. :)

This is very good i really liked it!!
its one of my faves :)

I really liked this. I can relate. Very emotional and moving. I loved it. Shanik