I like the poem. There's a few mistakes in the grammar and the way it's typed, but otherwise, it's really good.

Wow this poem is so true!! Good poem i like it!! 5/5 Its goin down in the favs ;)

This poem had lots of emotion as the others state. It kind of lulls you into reading into it more and you see the deepness of this particular piece. Good job.

-Dan