Nice poem :), tis true...never alone, but even with a room filled with friends....it can stil get so lonely

Thats a very good poem =]

i dont know why the 1st guy didnt rate it!

5/5

~tia

This is really cool, the whole message was so inspiring. I loved your poem, every part of it was so great. I liked how you kept saying "alone" but in the end you put "we are never alone"...Nicely done, take care!

Wow great poem i love it..

This one has message. But I really don't like the last stanza. But overall it's okay.

Aww
this was so sweet!
can't wait for you to post more!

Great job.

Excellent poem (goosebump good) very nice structure to the poem that helped to really make this work, an epiphany or imagination who will ever know when loneliness messes with our minds.
5/5

Grant

Great poem, keep up the good work!