Beautiful Night

by Monica93   Jul 25, 2008


Have you ever seen such a beautiful night
And i am sure we will spend it starting a fight
Lately that is all we seem to be able to do
Because all you seem to do is be untrue

Have you ever seen such a beautiful night
And now we are starting to fight
And as these tears fall down my face
All i want to do is melt into your embrace

Have you ever seen such a beautiful night
And now we are reaching the end of our fight
And as i reach the end of my cries
I finally realize that this will be the end of our last goodbyes

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  • 16 years ago

    by KN

    I really like how you repeated the title because the "beautiful night" seems to create some contrast as if you wouldn't expect to be fighting at such a time. Anyways, very nice, great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    The first line reminds me of a song from Lizze Mcguire [sp?] ><

    Anyways, I think it's a good start. I think you need to go into detail about the fight, though. What was it about? What was said? Were thing thrown? Was there yelling? We're left out and don't know what happened. o.O

    Other than that it was good. ^.^

    Keep writing!
    Cayce

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