This is a sweet poem. very touching and wisely written. it has a great flow and you expressed your feelings well.

So Maybe It Was My Fault,
That You Walked Right Out My Life,
With Your Heart Stabbed A Million Times,
& Me, Holding The Knife.

i would have to say those were my favorite lines. i loved the knife part, it was creative. job well done! 5/5.

oh, and my nickname is Lilbit also!

-Ashlei.