Comments : Its only just begun..

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    Impressive!!...It was good that u wrote ur poem with rhyme..
    sometimes some people even the close ones can't get what u r goin through but it's life..No body would but u..

    I enjoyed reading ur poem a lot..
    Good job,plz keep it up..

  • 16 years ago

    by XxBrokenInsidexX

    I love this poem & right now i can relate soo much!
    ....i just moved with my mom and well it hurts and makes me cry every day and she thinks im over exaggerating and looks right past it....
    i sooo think this poem relates to everything im going through & i absolutely love it!
    great poem!
    5/5 <3

  • 16 years ago

    by OmniLotus

    Loveed it cause i lived it =B

    keep moving that pen.....or typing

  • 16 years ago

    by mvep

    This si a very great poetry I like it a lots good work the motion flower nicely