That person will come for u soon.

This was a very good poem though it was shorter than I would have liked it to be. I think if it were longer it would be better but that is just my thought. The flow of the poem was awesome and the emotion was good to. You told exactly what was true and that makes this poem that better to. Well at any rate good job.

A lovely poem...simple and gets to the point..but has so much meaning behind it. x

I think everyone can relate to this. Which is great. But I was drawn in or super excited to read it. I think it's great your getting thoughts out but if you show a little more emotion your poems could be fantastic. Because people can relate to a broad topic but when you narrow it down using lots of imagery and words they can relate more because it's what they want to read.
4/5