by Michael D Nalley Jul 25, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
You got an annoying monkey on your back |
by she
Gosh, i love your poetry |
by LilBit
Wow! |
by Bugg
Wow! I loved the vocabulary that you used. I was blown away by it. The rhyming didn't seem forced at all. :) It was really good to say the least. |
Excellent poem. Good use of imagery and language. The poem was structured well and the rhyming did not seem forced at all and the flow was flawless. |
by Jessica
This was really goood, the vocabulary you used was great, the poem flowed really well and you could feel the emotion. i also found some lines quite amusing which was good, nice job :] 5/5 |