This was really goood, the vocabulary you used was great, the poem flowed really well and you could feel the emotion. i also found some lines quite amusing which was good, nice job :] 5/5

Excellent poem. Good use of imagery and language. The poem was structured well and the rhyming did not seem forced at all and the flow was flawless.
One thing though, In the fifth stanza in the line, 'Your song has been sang' It should be sung not sang.

Overall great poem. 5/5

Take Care!
-Shannon <3

Wow! I loved the vocabulary that you used. I was blown away by it. The rhyming didn't seem forced at all. :) It was really good to say the least.

Wow!
Great Poem,
Very Interesting,
i ♥'d It!

5/5!

Gosh, i love your poetry
this poem touched me,
great metaphors

You gave me fifty lashes
I pray my back will heel
--is heel supossed to be heal?

5/5