by Fiend in the Iron Maiden Jul 25, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Give, Give, Give, your hands held out for more |
by stella
Brilliant<3 |
Ok, this is actually my fav poem written by you so far. the rhyming went together perfect, it made so much sense in such a painful way. your saying i have skills, i am jealous of the way you can write. you can take sweet inocent nursery rhymes and turn them into soemthing dark and scary and mysterious and so your own. great poem. 5/5 |
Oh wow. this is amazingly powerful. i love it. 5/5!!! |
by Jaymz
Very nicely written |
by Iris
This poem is very well written!!well done!5/5 |