A Suicide's Secret

by iM LYiNG tO MY SELf   Jul 25, 2008


As she stands there in the mirror
Just her thoughts seem to reflect
What she sees is not yet clear
Only signs of her neglect

She cries into the darkness
But no one seems to listen
All she needs is some forgiveness
For her hopes just haven't risen

She soon begins to bleed
Her life passes by her so quick
Her soul has not yet freed
What happened she won't forget

The blade has cut too deep
Does she feel remorse or pain?
It's a suicide's secret to keep
All her thoughts she shall retain

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  • 16 years ago

    by Searching for Guidance

    Wow...very deep, but again nicely written. ur poems follow a rhyme scheme similar to mine and i really like them! thanks for sharing :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Honey Kisses 18

    Not a good poet? yea right... girl ya got skillzz.. this was really good.. and i understand fully.. i was there.. u aren't the cuttin emo but i was.. I jux never dressed like one.. to everyone i looked normal but inside.. inside i was a tossing storm and i was drowning... so i cut.. and cut ... and cut... and many times tried exactly what your poem implies.. didn't succeed thank god but i atleast know that with that experience i can understan and help others like me in that situation.. u should read my poem called 'the truth about me' ... it should relate to you also.. love much.. and absolutely LOVED da poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Jan pompies

    I lovit<3

  • 16 years ago

    by claire

    Dude that poem rocks!! love it <3

    5/5

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