Dude that poem rocks!! love it <3

5/5

I lovit<3

Not a good poet? yea right... girl ya got skillzz.. this was really good.. and i understand fully.. i was there.. u aren't the cuttin emo but i was.. I jux never dressed like one.. to everyone i looked normal but inside.. inside i was a tossing storm and i was drowning... so i cut.. and cut ... and cut... and many times tried exactly what your poem implies.. didn't succeed thank god but i atleast know that with that experience i can understan and help others like me in that situation.. u should read my poem called 'the truth about me' ... it should relate to you also.. love much.. and absolutely LOVED da poem

Wow...very deep, but again nicely written. ur poems follow a rhyme scheme similar to mine and i really like them! thanks for sharing :)