"The 'wakening calls of the song birds"
`im pretty sure you didn't mean to put the " ' " before wakening, because it is obviously not needed.

wonderful write. this poem had some wonderful imagery in the first few stanzas, and then you got into the message towards the end of this poem, well done. i liked how this poem was longer, it was definatly something i enjoyed reading more, because there was more to this poem. there was some imagery from just imagining the morning and the birds singing and dew on the grass.. and everything. just perfectly written. very well described. great vocabulary. an overall amazing poem, that definatly impressed me. keep it up, 5/5.