Wonder

by H E Losey   Jul 25, 2008


Some times I sit and ponder
Right or wrong my life to change
Live for the future, relive the past
Which path to take? My mind in wonder

In deepest thoughts I find me
Asking "What if..." "What would be now?"
Decisions made in times gone by
Hauntingly reveal what I've come to be

Could I affect those days long past
And just one youthful error change
What a boon t'would be to me
From these doldrums I'd be cast

And then I could sit and ponder
All those bounties I received
Planning of my brilliant tomorrow's
Knowing which path, my life a wonder

Published 2006

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ray Smallshaw

    I think your poem will be appreciated by all who read it as it does strike the right topic and all of us can relate to looking back back at our lot and pondering what we could or what we should have donethen realise it is now to late one has to settle for what they have, a great thought provoker and good poem another 5 /5 well worth it

  • 16 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    Ah yes that question is always there. Well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by Annaam

    Good One...!!
    5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    I loved this poem, because I can relate to asking myself the things you do as well. The first stanza sounded really great, and I could relate to that one the most. :] 5/5. Well done, keep posting new work.

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