This ditty is about how under extreme weather we are humans all seem to be closer...y'know, we actually look at each other in the street with a little bit of understanding...yeah...some feedback would be good...

You know what? I totally agree. People do tend to do that. And nice sense of imagry in that piece. It was a bit short, but then again it didn't have to be long. I hope you write more. Keep up the good work.

Exellent poem. I like it alot.