Hey this is really good. i know how you feel and i know its hard. i lost my daddy at the age of 12 and it wasn't easy. if you want to talk just private message me.

Very nice i like it alot good job! 5/5

This sounds sad. if i didn't know what it feels like to lose someone you would convey this feeling perfectly. and the part which touched me the most was the last part-you not remembering the last thing you said must be eating you alive. good job. good reading thanx