I think this is a poem great! keep it up, i'd love to read more

I loved this. It had a great feel to it and a great rhythm. Keep writing :)

Great poem , I really love it well written .

You have a very unique way of writing that is really wonderful
the structure of your poems isn't traditional but the flow is wonderful
excellent job

I can really relate! something like this just happend to me... i can't even believe it.. we were just find and then suddenly.. she goes back to her ex..
this is what we call life! lol

Wow another brill piece frm u. one thing tht i will say is the sooner u let go the better, ive realised tht as i never thought i wud get over my ex but i hav and now im wiv the most amazin guy ever. anyway keep up the gd wrk and pm me sumtime. 5/5