I thought you loved me

by hollyxxmariee2011   Jul 26, 2008


I thought you loved me
I thought you really cared
I loved you so much
And those feelings I thought we shared

You made me happier
Then I had been in a long time
And all I did was try to make you happy
Is that such a crime?

I thought we were perfect
Everything felt so right
We never argued and not once
Did we have a fight

I always made you laugh
You loved to make me smile
It was great while it lasted
Though it only lasted a little while

I really did care for you
And I so much let that show
You told me you were so happy
So why did you let me go ?

I still care for you
And miss you with all my heart
And though we aren't’t together
I’ll love you while we’re apart

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  • 13 years ago

    by asanda

    Iv loved it

  • 13 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    I like the simplicity of the whole poem. the use of uncomplicated words to show how you feel. i really enjoyed reading this, tho im not sure if enjoyed is the right word cause the poem is kinda sad, but i know you know what i mean. :D

  • 14 years ago

    by Love Panda

    Some lines seem to be forced in rhymes. and the last few lines sound so familliar, ive probably read this poem before - probably even comented on it, it wouldnt suprise me, i lose track of who i have commented on.

    Not a bad read - IBE

  • 16 years ago

    by Lovebattery

    Very good poem i liked reading it very much.

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