Very nice poem indeed :)

Ok. so 1, this was beautiful. It's sweet and emotional and heartfelt. I liked the title, it made me laugh. very you.

you obviously went off a little here from where you usually are....normally you write four lines, this was three. normally i dislike three lines..but it worked here. idk why. but it did.

the point was good....and strong and blah blah blah.
so basically, good job, jesse. ^.^