Wow!
This Is Very Good..
i Love The Details You Put
In This...
I Had A Picture In My
Head Of Every Word Of It.
Great Job!
I Love This!

I really like this its got such an original story to it. I love how it is sad, but then the ending has another level which brings more meaning to it. Great work 5/5

I loved the emotions you expressed throughout this poem with your flawless choice of words. It had me captivated from the beginning and I was hooked until the end. Full of meaning and power. Well done *5/5*

Simply amazing. The flow, the story, the choice of words. I love it. It isn't depressing like so many other poems. It ends so well!