by Megan Jul 26, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
If he really loved me he'd tell me he's sorry. |
Keep your Head up Babe! Dont let him bother you. |
by joanne
This is good but it deffiantly repeats alot and it doesn't really show your emotion of how much you loved him. it just says you do but just sayin "i loved him" cant really explain the pain you felt when he did leave you. |
Wow this made me think...that this kid ii rele like, doesn't lubb me lik he says...wow thanksz for making me think =] |
I honestly wasn't wowed by this poem. By all means, its is better than most, but not so great as to win the poetry contest. |
U so deserved your win. Great Poem |