IF he really loved me.

by Megan   Jul 26, 2008


If he really loved me he'd tell me he's sorry.
If he really loved me he'd come back to me.
If he really loved me he'd tell me he loves me.
If he really loved me he'd show his love.
If he really loved me he wouldn't lie to me.
If he really loved me he wouldn't hurt me.
but these ifs will never come true because he's not sorry and he doesn't love me. If only he know how much I loved him. But now he'll never know.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Cristian Teo Regalado

    Keep your Head up Babe! Dont let him bother you.

  • 16 years ago

    by joanne

    This is good but it deffiantly repeats alot and it doesn't really show your emotion of how much you loved him. it just says you do but just sayin "i loved him" cant really explain the pain you felt when he did leave you.

    i like it though

    -joanne

  • 16 years ago

    by BrOkeN HeArt Can kill

    Wow this made me think...that this kid ii rele like, doesn't lubb me lik he says...wow thanksz for making me think =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Neme juste un jouet

    I honestly wasn't wowed by this poem. By all means, its is better than most, but not so great as to win the poetry contest.

    Perhaps the simplicity and the amount of pure cliche got the ones who voted high on this... lack of imagery, emotion, and honestly as original as a hallmark card. =/ I'm harsh, ya, but in contrast to the other two this poem was... painful.

    I will read your other poems to see if you have something there... but this is just... meh.

    Grats anyways.

  • U so deserved your win. Great Poem