Countdown

by HearMe   Jul 26, 2008


10 minutes ago, I believed every word you said
9 thoughts back, my heart led
8 times you assured me there was no one else
7 trials, and I took my heart off it's shelf

Tick tock tick
Time goes on
Life makes you strong
Your memory will be gone

6 seconds for the truth to come out
5 words, and I chose to be without
4 steps to walk away
3 members? Too many for me to stay

Tick tock tick
Time goes on
Life makes you strong
Your memory will be gone

Two people now, I'm out of the picture
One decision, and now you're with her

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mia

    This was very different and I liked it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    I havnt read a poem like this before it was very interesting, great work!
    5/5 for originality

  • 16 years ago

    by YourOneAndOnly

    Wow this poem was amazin, i love the way u organised it, well done u have talent here,hope to hear more soon. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Meagan Adelle

    Great poem. well written and it really flows. Also it's different than most poems i've read. Good luck with your future works. =)

  • 16 years ago

    by jLegendc

    Oh my... i had an idea of writing a poem like this... i wanted it to be longer coz i wanted more! good poem and well written...

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