Comments : Young girl

  • 16 years ago

    by LiveLoveLearnDie

    Im so sorry you went through this,
    nice dedication

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I'm sorry you had to go through this.....

    I know this is a song, but it repeats to much, to make it better try describing what your cousin was like, kind of like this:

    "Always making people laugh and smile"

    Or something to that extent...

    But otherwise good job, you could make this into a better song and add a lot more about your cousin and how great she was to have around, you get what I'm saying, so good job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Cristian Teo Regalado

    Im sorry thats really sad :( 5/5 i can see it being a song :)