Comments : Stolen Hearts

  • 16 years ago

    by Cristian Teo Regalado

    Beautiful Poem!!! Someones in love lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    ""Because I meant what I said,
    I will never love again.
    But you'll never understand."
    --Firecracker ;; Four Letter Lie"
    `Oh, so you based this off of a quote kind of? That's cool. <3

    "When you are near, I get butterflies.
    You feel the same, and you do not deny."
    `Gaaahh. I have this feeling so many times as well. It's insane. I know how it is.

    "You make me feel things I can not explain.
    And, I know there can only be more to gain."
    `Again, I know this feeling! I think almos tanyone can relate to that feeling whether they are in a boyfriend/girlfriend relationship or if it's just simply infatuation.

    "We truly know we shall never part.
    For we have simply stolen each other's hearts."
    `Aww! Those are two adorable lines.

    Overall, a very sweet write. This poem was very thoughtful and expressed very well. This was so adorable hunny.<3 I loved the last two lines it summed it all up. Wonderful write & I wish you and Matt the best of luck <33 :] 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    When you are near, I get butterflies.
    You feel the same, and you do not deny.

    I like how you rhymed those two together. XD I was just thinking...hmm...some of the rhymes seem over done, (I've seen them before on a lot of poems) then you suprised me. :D Go you! XD

    With your hand in mine,
    I get chills that run down my spine.

    I believe it would sound better if you changed it to chilld run down my spine. The flow would work better.

    We truly know we shall never part.
    For we have simply stolen each other's hearts.

    Awwwww! <3<3<3 ^_^

    Four out of five. It was so cute. ^______^