by The Queen Jul 26, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Everytime We Touch |
This title immediately brought a certain song to mind. It began wonderfully, the flor and rythym were superb. You're repetition was great, "Everytime we touch" and yet using this also didn't take away from it from you wanting to make it sound any certain way. |
by ALEX
I have to say, I came into this poem a little skeptically- afraid it might be some twist on the song. Aside from the somewhat interrupted rhyme scheme, I was pleasantly surprised. For once, a love poem I can stomach! Congrats on a good write. |
This is a masterpiece. this romantic and sensual poem is delivered in a perfect package |
THIS WAS VERY GOOD YOU DESCRIBE YOUR EMOTIONS VERY WELL AND WHAT IT'S LIKE TO BE IN LOVE WITH SOMEONE |
Aww this poem gave me shivers |