This title immediately brought a certain song to mind. It began wonderfully, the flor and rythym were superb. You're repetition was great, "Everytime we touch" and yet using this also didn't take away from it from you wanting to make it sound any certain way.

"Everytime we touch, two hearts beat as one
You are to me I am to you bear that in mind
Touch me forever with your magic hand
Life is being near you, do you understand? "

This ending was phenomonal. It ended well an ending to a bittersweet story. 5/5