Very good..

I felt little lsot in the feleings like you where lost when you write this poem or this is the feelign you want to deliver to us !!

i think it si a great structure just need more worik on the rythm it wil be more pweorfull
you have a good one

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.. SO easy to relate to . You write alot about this boy .. Well I'm guessing it's the same one . He seems to be quite the jerk face , and thats the meanest thing i could come up with to post on the sight : ) . I had more things in mind . I really do enjoy this one , the flow mostly . It's short , but gets the point across . Well done : ) .

This Boy..is actually my dad sorry just had to put the facts straight ...