Comments : I wish i could make it better

  • 16 years ago

    by NicoleBaby101

    Wow that was a simple but powerful poem! it showed how you love this girl and how you fell hurt or upset about what happend in your relationship. so i give it a 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsea King

    It was great!! You said such a great lesson with just a small poem, You truly have a gift of writing!!
    5/5