by Helene Jul 26, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
She held her baby tight, |
by Gentle Storm
Very touching.... |
by Arun Khan
One thing I disagree in.. The daughter, for whom she had first given all, was so like, but Alfie is always there to catch her if she'd fall.. |
by Invited
Outstanding emotional work- I love it - You definitely have my vote! I love the title as well and the bit about for children and how he necer cared...5/5 I'd love to see more- This is now on my favourite poems list - I just love it. It provoked emotion, the structure and layout was incredible and you could relate to this. |