Wow great poem i really got into it. 5/5!

Wow. I've written a poem in a very similar format to this.. But the way you used the format to tell a story was excellent. I especially loved the beginning because it reminded me of me and my guy;

'Amazed
When I gazed into your brown eyes and saw the truth'

And

'Vulnerable
When your tender lips first touched mine and left a burning sensation'

Were my two favourite lines. It's great how you put so much emotion, Love and warmth into the first part of the poem, and then chane it to such hate and misery towards the end.

Loved it, 5/5

Sole x

Pretty neat poem. ;]
It brings out so many emotions.
4/5

This poem was very excellently written. It blew me away. I love how you used the title. It fit perfectly. I love how you described your feelings so well in this poem. Your feelings and emotions truly shined through. Beautiful write. 5/5. :]