"Gently brushing past my mind
Like the breeze off a passing butterfly"

^^ I love similes, and that is a perfect one.

The last two lines didn't post correctly, it has that gibberish stuff in it, but otherwise .. this is another great short love poem. Well done, keep doing what you do.. 5/5. =)

This is really nice and good.... :)

I like this one and I don't usally like mush ones.

Gently brushing past my mind
Like the breeze off a passing butterfly

these two line are really great.'