Wow. I like it, a lot. It actually shows the pain that you are explaining. Comment me
back, if you want too =D..
Taylorr.

PS. I gave you a 5/5 =D =P

Great poem you captured the emotion and pain very well. i almost started to cry i gues its because i know how it feels...but umm back to the poem 5/5 for sure

WOW! great poem 5/5