Comments : Perfect Lovers

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    WOW. You sure write some sexy poems. Loool. This was very well written poetically however. Nicely doneeee. 5/5 (:

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    NOT WIRTEN FOR SOMONE PARTICULAR

    mmm
    let me tell you somthign i felt like i am in bed with you in this poem , tooo much deltails , maked me imagine it my slef !!lol

    mmm

    but you seem soo hurry
    mm

    Just hold me close and stick it in.
    Don't hesitate let's just begin.

    jsut in the second paragraph
    directly to work , no fun to make an entracne lol
    :)
    mmm
    in all i loved that poem , i will add it to my farorite now , :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Richard aka SmoothVodka

    Nice