Woohoo... Sounds very overloaded. If this would be real I would be very worried about the speaker of the poem. It is very unhealthy way of living life.

Nothing is worth of burning our candles too fast. We work to live. Not live to work. This is how God created us.

He made all the fruit gardens so humans could enjoy them. He did not create us to be robots. When we dedicate ourselves in some matter too much we forget the more important thing like what is the purpose of this life... Why do we work...

Of course everyone should use their talent and ability to serve God and take care of the community we are live in. Work can help us to feel we are useful. We are wanted and needed...

I think this poem is very good. I like it a lot. It is too common nowdays people are overloaded because of work.

Nice writing. Keep it up!

Lol, don't be so worried. This is just a figment of my wild imagination. Then again, I should really be sleeping more, lol.