Comments : A friend shares my bed

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    Suprising title. *smiles*

    I can see the writer is a dog-person. From this and one of your previous poems reveal that.

    A dog in your bed. Well, that is pure friendship then... To take your dog lying beside you. Not all of us would do that. I remember my sister had a golden rider. It was a totally beautiful lovely dog with good nature. My little sister used to ride on him when she was young.

    I think many dog-owners can relate to this poem... Lying down and stroking the dog's hair....Thinking about the whole universe...calming down and relax...

    Lovely poem... :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Jim McMillen the man within

    What a lovely feeling with her warm and tender body
    Lying next to mine
    Every so often a gentle nibble on my ear
    Warm tongue flicking at the lobes

    her name is twitch and she is an 8 week old pitbull terrier,shame on you what were you thinking
    -------------
    Hey I was just wondering why you weren't nibbling back, you dog you!
    Good poem Grant,...5/5...JIM

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert Meuser

    Good one. I have two that share my bed. One Pharaoh Hound and one Basenji. I like this poem. You are a softy for dogs. Me too.

  • 16 years ago

    by charles

    Outstanding the way you make one feel as if he or she is there. Especially loved the comment at the end- very creative!

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Hehe, i like this poem, aww such a wonderful friendship :]

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    Haha! what a surprise ending. it made me laugh a little. fantastic write.
    and i agree with above comments, imagery you created was amazing.
    i love my dog.. he sleeps with me too :)
    haha
    very good.

  • 13 years ago

    by Blizzard

    You made my day sir... :) =5/5=

  • 13 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Thank you so much for your. Comment LH

  • 13 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Thank you so much for your. Comment LH