Your Hero

by Kalee   Jul 28, 2008


Let me be the one,
To hold you when you're scared,
Let me be the one,
To see the truth behind the smile,
Let me be the one,
To walk beside you in the dark,
Let me be the one,
To put your heart back together,
When it has been broken.

I want to be the one
To hold you when you're scared
The one to see what you truly feel
The one to be with you in the dark
The one to fix your broken heart

I love you with all of my heart
So, please let me be your hero

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Please don't tell me that it is a bit repetative, i already know that.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Very emotional and true. Well expressed feelings. Nice job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Han84

    Hey not spoken for ages hope your ok??! found it bit hard to follow sometimes but it were cool take care

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    Wow such a wonderful poem, the repetitiveness here was a good thing, it made it more warming and easier to get involved in this poem, so it made it more personal.

    i could relate to this, so could others with their feelings. the simplistic phasing was excellent and allowed you to be lulled into this poem, to i felt go to another world.

    bravo, 5/5 David

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