Arabic love (senryu)

by Goodbye   Jul 28, 2008


One thousand and one
Arabic nights together
written in a book

Two souls become one
pages of lustful passion
-fairytale of love

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Edited with help of lovely Miss Take :)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Wonderful...

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    I think I became addicted to ur Senryu and Haiku...U write them perfectly and ur subjects are very interesting and Strange..
    Ur talent is PRICELESS..
    Take care and wish ya all the best..

  • 16 years ago

    by Heba

    What a wonderful poem.It is very nice.Am an arabian girl and I truely know this story well.
    So lovely and very nice...

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Another very good Senryu from you. You've chosen unusual and interesting topic. Lovely poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    A wonderful poem, full of lustful imagination and erotism.

    I love this form of poetry, it really condenses the emotional intent.

    Well done

    Michael