Comments : Harmony (Haiku)

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    What a beautiful haiku, this was pleasant and enjoyable to read........Great work, your descriptions were lovely......Keep writing, always and forever!

  • 16 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    Good image wording and count are off.

  • 16 years ago

    by Empathy

    I was never interested in the form of haiku poetry when I had to write it, but when I read it I always enjoy it. This has been one of the more compelling haiku's I've read in awhile. It paints a simplistic and perfect vivid image right into the mind. As I read the last line, I imagined sparrows chirping in my backyard. Just commencing with their natural routine. Excellent work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    Nice haiku. ;) You know your ways to my heart, Sourav, don't you? I am a huge haiku fan.

    This is simple and beautiful haiku. Well done. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    What a gorgeous Haiku!!...Ur description is so nice..
    I enjoyed reading it so much..
    Keep up the good work:)..

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    This Haiku is like a soft whisper:)
    So very beautiful!

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    That is a beautiful picture you have painted with your words..loved the read!
    Take care