What a beautiful haiku, this was pleasant and enjoyable to read........Great work, your descriptions were lovely......Keep writing, always and forever! |
Good image wording and count are off. |
by Empathy
I was never interested in the form of haiku poetry when I had to write it, but when I read it I always enjoy it. This has been one of the more compelling haiku's I've read in awhile. It paints a simplistic and perfect vivid image right into the mind. As I read the last line, I imagined sparrows chirping in my backyard. Just commencing with their natural routine. Excellent work. |
by Goodbye
Nice haiku. ;) You know your ways to my heart, Sourav, don't you? I am a huge haiku fan. |
What a gorgeous Haiku!!...Ur description is so nice.. |
by Ingrid
This Haiku is like a soft whisper:) |
by Meena Krish
That is a beautiful picture you have painted with your words..loved the read! |