I Love You...Sometimes

by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden   Jul 28, 2008


When you're kind and considerate saying sweet things to me
I love you.
When you're cold, unreliable, and won't let me see
I don't.
When you're thoughtful, charming, bringing a smile to my face
I love you.
When you turn away and make me feel out of place
I don't.
When you're a beautiful poet with a sensitive soul
I love you.
When you isolate and self-destruct after making me whole
I don't.
When you tell me I'm your greatest happiness in life
I love you.
When you reject my help when it comes to the knife
I don't.
When you accept my love and it makes your heart glow
I love you.
When you reject my kisses and just let me go
I don't.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    I absolutely loved how you kind of made comparisons in this poem as to when you love this person and when you don't. That was unique and I love the format of this piece, it's something different. Your emotions were so clear in this one. Keep it up. Great write. :] 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Travis

    I like this one
    it truly describes how you feel about this person emotionally
    well done
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweetdream

    I love the mix of emotion you show...it's so real... i understand what it is like to feel both love and saddness because of a person...this poem makes it clear that you do too... A+ you rock

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