Down on the knees

by A piece of my broken heart is embedded in you forever   Jul 28, 2008


Down on the knees,
With pain so deep,
Eyes filled with tears,
A heart full of fear,
hands reaching for you,
Longing to be with you,
Thinking every minute of you,
Wondering, where are you?
Waiting for your call!
Trying not to call!
failing to forget you,
succeeding in falling for you,
Just waiting to lose you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ash

    Very different to your usual style but none the less it's a good vent.

    "Down on the knees,
    With pain so deep,
    Eyes filled with tears,
    A heart full of fear,"

    ^^ Just says so much within those few words. The helplessness, the weakness and the eventual defeat.

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