No Matter When

This is a really cute poem, but I think you could improve it. It was cliche for me and not enough emotions and feelings. Also, repeating, "sometimes" kind of made the poem less interesting, I just thought the repetition of it wasn't that great there. Otherwise, I love what you were saying here, very sweet, just put more into it, and make it unique.....

Keep writing, always and forever.....

His is so sweet. there is nothing really unique about this piece in poetic aspect - repetition and contrast are pretty common - but it doesn't make the poem itself common, because there is such a strong and beautiful emotion in it. The poem breaths with love, if i can say so. i also love how you organise stanzas. the rhythm is rather simple, like a childish poem, but this is what makes it so sincere i guess. this is a poem every girl would be happy to hear from her boyfriend.
this is a perfect example of how love can expressed without unneeded decorations.
5/5

First thing I noticed right off the bat is that you need to captiolize your i's. :]

Secondly,
"Sometimes i kiss you vigorously"
`Good word choice, vigorously.. good word.

I didn't really like the repitition quite honestly.. of "sometimes...." but, it was okay I guess.. but I think you could have made it more of your own because in my opinion this poem was like really clique.

Overall, a sweet love poem. But it was just too clique for me. But definatly well expressed emotions. Good write, 4/5.