I love this poem, such vivid imagery that you have placed in my mind. This was so enjoyable to read and you're descriptions were amazing! Great work. Keep writing, always and forever!

I like the way you compare everyday motion to dancing , as I guess that is what it realy is, A poetic simplicity. To see beauty in the simplest things is not only an art itself but a gift from God to be enjoyed daily and treasured always. ..Jim...5/5

Great write!!! keep it up
That's a great way to look at life, that's why I like reading poems, because they give me another oppinion and lets me see things through another persons eyes.

This was fantastic. Never really thought of everyday things in such a manner before so you pretty much introduced me to something new.
"I love the swaying dance
Of the wind that carries the leaves
In the looping swooping motion
It is gracefulness it achieves"
That was so beautifully written allowing the reader to truely feel delight from the imagery it produced.A great read indeed. 5?5 ;)