Miracle.

by Courageous Dreamer   Jul 28, 2008


-*Written for a Contest.*-

It's astonishing how you make me feel.
Every word that escapes from those lips,
fills me up with butterflies instantly.
A perfect miracle that came into my life, is what you are.

I can always count on you to be there for me,
supporting me through flawless and dreadful times.
You'll linger in my heart forever,
nobody will ever be good enough to expel you.

I couldn't be more fortunate to have met you;
someone who will always care about me.
Although we are only good friends [nothing more, nothing less],
It feels so good inside to know you care.

You manage to always be able to make me smile,
no matter what kind of mood I'm in.
Instead of putting yourself first,
you put others before you.

You've gratified my every illusion, wish, hope.
I can't believe that what I feel is becoming reality.
You are like a miracle who stepped into my life,
and will always be known as the guy who makes me smile.

You ARE the miracle that I always wished for, but never got until now.

-*This person knows who they are.<3*-

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  • 16 years ago

    by Heba

    Wow,it was really touching and beautiful.I just rembered my best friends when I read it.

  • 16 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    Third stanza. Double use of care ... Grab a thesaurus and use another word? And I felt like it was the beginning of that stanza that cut the flow off short, but it starts to get on its way again later.

    You've gratified my every illusion, wish, hope.
    `It bothers me that you don't have an "and" there. It's necessary really, since it's not like I haven't done that before. But for some reason it seems weird...

    It also bothered me the double use of miracle at the very end of your piece so soon and so close to each other.

    But other than that, I feel like this piece was better than the one I previously read. Though, again, not your best, it was definitely better. I felt like you could've used more than just telling the reader about how much you feel grateful, since, if you're writing a poem for them and about them that's so optimistic, of course we know you care about them.

    But then when we're writing pieces like this for our friends and those we love, I guess that's just the same things we want to repeat over and over again for them to know.

    It was a nice write.
    ..__MiNDYY

  • 16 years ago

    by Justin

    I really liked your ending of the poem..... just seem to like complete it... I didnt see ANYTHING wrong heh but i did get alot of emotion out of it and whoever it is must be a very important person in your life that you should never let go =D

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Supporting me through flawless and dreadful times.

    Using flawless to describe those times was unique.

    Awwwwww! I know whoooooo! ^______-

    Tee hee. He must loooove it. :D Five out of five.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sole

    Beautiful. I only wish I had a great friend who could write a lovely poem like this about me :)
    That's an awesome poem, and I don't generally enjoy non-rhyming poems.
    I especially liked the first 3 lines, they conjured up such a great image and the reader can really feel the butterflies.
    Great writing once again!

    Sole x

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