by Austin Jul 28, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Whose homes these are I wish I knew. |
by Brittany C
Hmm, I really liked this poem. The wording and flow was great. However the flow would be even better it you were split the 1st stanza into 3 stanzas instead. It would help flow better into the last stanza. Other then that this poem was great and different. I gave it a 5/5 for those reasons. Keep up the good work =) |
by ether
"Whose homes these are I wish I knew." |
by Jenni Marie
"Whose homes these are I wish I knew. |
Very interesting poem.. |
This poem is really dark, but it also writes about love so i liked the contrast. |