Crawling pupil

by Heart of Green   Jul 29, 2008


In the corner sits a whispering guitar
Humming the music from my dreams..
Drags me down.. like some sweet gravity
As I lay there in my casket

…watching from the window tonight

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  • 14 years ago

    by WakingFreedom

    It's dark and well written. Mystery flows behind the words though. I love the first line. It just sings and reaches out and grabs the readers attention.
    "In the corner sits a whispering guitar..."
    Just love it.

  • 16 years ago

    by neo

    Dark and wonderfully intriguing. I adore the darker side, most will never get it. It's too powerful 5/5

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