I Can Touch Them (They Won't Know) Part 1

by Curing the Comon Cliche   Jul 29, 2008


Eclipsed sun and winter winds
On my own and together again
And this is how I'm gonna go
Fall to the ground and crash in the snow

Would it be best if I just didn't talk
Laying in the snow, I've got nowhere left to walk
Looking past the stars, I've got a place to go
And I close my eyes and whisper

"I can touch them, they won't know"

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  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Is it ridiculous how i went from one minute laughing at something to wanting to cry? i think it is...yay for jesse-induced mood swings. rofl.

    Would it be best if I just didn't talk
    Laying in the snow, I've got nowhere left to walk

    ^^ I wish it was that easy. Really I do. That we could just lay down and choose. and maybe know what's gonna happen next. instead of spending a hundred thousand nights questioning...i really liked those lines.

    the last line was breathtaking. one of those moments where i hate you. lol. cause you make it seem so easy. "I think I want to go write a poem..." and then bang. it's not fair. lol. i've said that a lot lately..

    so now that i've rambled, great job, jesse. as always. 5/5

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