Great poem i like at the end when you say nteh scars are here to stay

it jsut remind me of somthing in my life

The whole poem was very sad.. you have this person's named sewed in your heart and now the scars are all that resides. :\ What a sad write.. but yet again you managed to put together a piece filled with emotions and a great rhyme/flow. :] Keep it up! 5/5